Gene Fry's Comments on the draft 2013 National Climate Assessment 

re Ch 1 - Executive Summary 0613
re Ch 2 - Our Changing Climate 0613 esp. permafrost, also Arctic sea ice volume and paleoclimate, require reality checks.  The Assessment is deficient for being inconsistent with these realities.
re Ch 6 - Agriculture 0613 - misses out on steep declines
re Ch 27 - CO2 Removal as Mitigation 0613 - This subject is almost missing entirely.
re Missing - $ Cost of Damages 0613 - This subject is also missing, though promised in the preceding Assessment.

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